HOT Writing Rubric

Establish goals/Assess results/Teach and write better
What's good/Did it Work?/What's next?
Criteria 5 4 3 2 1 0

Concept

Sophisticated perspective. Critical insight. Demonstrates complex thinking. Understands the material and assignment. Where applicable, includes relevant details and quotes. Strong comparisons to personal and contemporary themes when appropriate.

Less sophisticated. Clear expression that tends toward summary rather than analysis. Close to breaking through to a more analytical, critical, or creative approach.

Adheres to conventional or one-dimensional attitudes. Misunderstands other points of view. General statements.

Vague or predictable. Stock or cliché responses. No risk. Confuses some significant concepts.

Student wrote a response but clearly misunderstood the assignment. Student wrote very little.

No response.

Organization and Cohesiveness

Work functions well as a whole. Piece has a clear flow and a sense of purpose.

Response has either a strong lead, developed body, or satisfying conclusion, but not all three.

Uneven. Awkward or missing transitions. Weakly unified.

Wanders. Repetitive. Inconclusive.

Incoherent and fragmentary. Student didn't write enough to judge.

 

Voice and Tone

Voice is confident and appropriate. Consistently engaging. Active, not passive voice. Natural. A strong sense of both authorship and audience.

The speaker sounds as if he or she cares too little or too much about the topic. Or the voice fades in and out. Occasionally passive.

Tone is okay. But the paper could have been written by anyone. Apathetic or artificial. Overly formal or informal.

"I just want to get this over with."

Mechanical and cognitive problems so basic that tone doesn't even figure in. Student didn't write enough to judge.

 

Vocabulary and Word Choice

Words chosen are striking but natural. Description includes unusual adjectives and action verbs. Good control of alliteration and assonance.

Fine word choice and generally good language. Some parts may be routine.

Coherent but ordinary. Occasional misspellings.

Confusing. Many spelling errors. Extremely limited range of available vocabulary.

More errors than correct words. Student didn't write enough to judge.

 

And When Applicable...

Criteria

5 4 3 2 1 0

Creative Writing

Excellent use of imagery; similes; vivid, detailed descriptions; figurative language; puns; wordplay; metaphor; irony. Surprises the reader with unusual associations, breaks conventions, thwarts expectations.

Some startling images, a few stunning associative leaps with a weak conclusion or lesser, more ordinary images and comparisons. Inconsistent.

Sentimental, predictable, or cliché.

Borrows ideas or images from popular culture in an unreflective way.

Cursory response. Obvious lack of motivation and/or poor understanding of the assignment.

No response.

Visual Analysis Skills

Writes detailed descriptions of artifacts that display a comprehension of the overall composition and/or purpose of the artifact. Shows insight into the culture or context of origin. Uses terms that pertain to the visual arts or analysis of artifacts (if applicable).

Demonstrates comprehension of some terms, not others. Description is vivid but lacks insight. Good understanding of cultural significance.

Good attempt that neglects or misuses key terms. Description is lengthy but general, superficial. Lacks detail.

Very superficial, general relationship to the artifacts or image. No attempt to explain cultural significance.

Frustrated, aimless response. Does not engage with image much at all.

No response.

The HOT Writing Rubric is designed for use by undergraduate tutors, graduate workshop leaders, online journal editors, host teachers, and evaluators (including student researchers). It is based on rubrics developed by Project Zero at Harvard University and by the Composition Program at the University of California, Irvine. The rubric reflects HOT's emphasis on higher-order thinking skills, writing across the disciplines, and the value of both creative and academic writing. the rubric is designed to encourage and identify excellence among all writers, including those who are English language learners.